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You know what I think?
I think nobody is ok.
And that's okay..
they say when Alice fell
she didn't care.
All deflections reflected in.
The looking glass
made bare and thin.
Throughout the whole affair,
she dared to blame a single hare.
and despite her fate
of sadness.
she was simply late,
to meet her madness..
I shot a bullet at the ground.
It hit my shadow
and it fell down.
Writhing it slowly faded away,
I don't shoot bullets to this day..
simple short poems have their own merit don't they? 
this one reminds me of my childhood.
The world was small that day.
When it went not dark,
but grey..
and we had no remarks.
Trapped from the rain
at the sheltered part.
from the edge of mundane
a small world was ours.
for seconds
or hours
afraid to blink
and miss it all,
we stood among our worlds rise.
and let the silence
dream it's fall..
So if you feel another world,
drop gently with the rain.
trapped in that quiet place,
with they
who feel the same.
Don't speak.
take it in
take it all
you're gonna miss,
when the world
was small.
When The World Was Small
the rain came down
with clouds so grey
the world dispersed
people faded away
just me and you
watching the sky
the silence felt good
the warmth felt nice..
if i could change the world
i wouldn't
so this place could stay the same
this moment nailed down to steal beams
and dreams locked replayed for sound
and we would never age nor change in anyway
we could live,love and play around
so i forced the rules to bend
and hammered down the lives
locked each and every door
 and hid the truth in lies
i just wanted this moment to never end
so you wouldn't leave my side
but all i did was lay to waste
and what changed
was whats inside

the brave who fight fate are destined to lose
and their punishment is
to know that it was fated to be
You know what I think?
I think nobody is ok.
And that's okay..


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This was just the only widget I wasn't using...
Seriously if your still reading let me point out that there are a lot of cute and hot guys and girl's on deviant art who would love your points. Sooo maybe use your points as an icebreaker... still here? So your not interested huh?.. Well there's gotta be something more productive.. buy some DA gear or an art piece to support a fellow deviant.. still here? Ok look if you do donate I would have to probably feel obligated to do some DA community benefit or contest or something like that as thanks to give back and I honestly don't want that bad in my life. See look what you did. In the beginning this was fun. Is this what you do? Go to people's pages and take something fun and ruin it? Way to be that person. >:{

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Artist | Hobbyist | Varied
United States
I am an artist
My emotional sate of mind is easily swayed,
So You may me find me on one one side of the spectrum or the other. In and out of many different planes and levels.
I firmly believe I am incapable of describing myself
So I can only ask you to expect everything.
And expect nothing.

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LunarNightmare Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey Mierren, I wanted to personally thank you for joining us here at :iconwriters-commentary: Writers-Commentary We're very excited to have you! Feel free to begin submitting, we currently have a 5 a week limit, and start commenting on some of the works already submitted. I'm sure the poetry folder would hold some interest for you :)
If you have any questions, thoughts, or ideas feel free to message me, another Admin, or the group. 

Edges-to-Everything Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
Hello, J.T.! :handshake:

I have stumbled upon your writings and I'll visit your gallery as soon as I have a bit of time to do so. :nod:
I hope you're having a great day!

- Michael
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alyosha-k Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the watch!  :-)
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mentalnote100 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
ty for the watch my new friend. ;)
ThatPURPLERaven Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!:party::cake:
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Lovely-LaceyAnn-Art Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank You For The Watch!!!
sparkly10007747 Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
what's up
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dawn181 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for the watch.
XxXWiltingVioletXxX Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for the watch! :D It's not every day I find such a talented writer! You're excellent
SourAir Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for the watch, it really means a lot to me!! :heart: :hug:
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