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I was drowning in the sky,
as I breathed the ocean blue.
Crushed beneath the somber high,
on a rooftops secluded view.
A cloud rose within my chest.
I sighed it into air.
It bloomed a darkened swirling mess,
Then left a twisted prayer.
As I sank up the currents peak,
I broke the surface of the sky.
Ripples spread across its creek,
a dark haze seeps my eyes.
The Suns heat pricks my skin,
now all the air is gone.
Remnants of a clouded grin,
I awaken in the dawn.
I wake up on the roof,
The air had made me pale
but I don't breathe in.

I exhale.
Cloud Burst
I pondered the world that seemed so upside down
it only made sense that I'd fall up and drown
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I thought they were fake
plastic and strings
molded made poses
and fragile things 
but I think I was wrong
i made a mistake 
in a world of dolls 
a human is fake...
Telescope
by meh 

They said look through this telescope
and tell me what you see.
Count the stars and wondrous things,
that you will never ever be.
Solve the cosmic question,
if you love her she may tell.
Of the secrets left unmentioned
or the distance between heaven and hell.
They'd said look into this telescope
and you may find what you may seek.
I'll hide away the universe,
I dare you not to peek.
So they look on in their telescopes,
to find out what could be
but all the things I'd ever want,
are all down here with me.
-meh


I opened a window,
the wind was strong and rough.
This letter must be infinity
I feel the sky has called my bluff.
Either I cannot profess my feelings,
or just that words are not enough.
so I took a little time.
Folded you In between confessions,
found the words to rhyme
And stated my regression.
See I'm still here..
With this weight
and my fears.
I wish I could say I escaped through that window
That I am not the same
Writing these letters hoping you'll find them
Through these paper planes.
Paper planes


I hope someone finds this letter.
I've sent into the sky
Maybe someone more.
At least so more than I.
I hope they have the courage 
To do what I tried to do
And simply concede this letter 
From: me
To: you

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If I could draw a picture,
i'd make the best of me.
Sketch a draft for scripture,
just for you to see.
I'd show you how I smile,
redraw and shade my eyes
and hide away the details,
While shading in the lines.
I'd focus on the meaning
and means with every mark.
Make myself the shadow,
of a pure reflected dark.
Contrast would be the title,
Oh how nice it'd be to see.
To compare the pure untainted paper,
to the shaded and sketchy me.
 Then they see it clearly,
their faces bitter and tart.
They'd take my pencil dearly,
and erase me
all apart.
Picture Perfect
If I could draw a picture..
I'd draw a world apart.
I'd draw it like it is
But I wouldn't draw my heart.
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I thought they were fake
plastic and strings
molded made poses
and fragile things 
but I think I was wrong
i made a mistake 
in a world of dolls 
a human is fake...

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Mierren

Artist | Hobbyist | Varied
United States
I am an artist
My emotional sate of mind is easily swayed,
So You may me find me on one one side of the spectrum or the other. In and out of many different planes and levels.
I firmly believe I am incapable of describing myself
So I can only ask you to expect everything.
And expect nothing.
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LunarNightmare Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey Mierren, I wanted to personally thank you for joining us here at :iconwriters-commentary: Writers-Commentary We're very excited to have you! Feel free to begin submitting, we currently have a 5 a week limit, and start commenting on some of the works already submitted. I'm sure the poetry folder would hold some interest for you :)
If you have any questions, thoughts, or ideas feel free to message me, another Admin, or the group. 

Thanks
LunarNightmare
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Edges-to-Everything Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
Hello, J.T.! :handshake:

I have stumbled upon your writings and I'll visit your gallery as soon as I have a bit of time to do so. :nod:
I hope you're having a great day!

- Michael
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sakurashima Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the watch!  :-)
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mentalnote100 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
ty for the watch my new friend. ;)
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ThatPURPLERaven Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!:party::cake:
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Lovely-LaceyAnn-Art Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank You For The Watch!!!
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sparkly10007747 Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
what's up
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dawn181 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for the watch.
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XxXWiltingVioletXxX Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for the watch! :D It's not every day I find such a talented writer! You're excellent
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SourAir Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for the watch, it really means a lot to me!! :heart: :hug:
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