Raindrops slow the noise.
Steady goes the quiet from the sound.
Noisy glances from girls and boys trying not to move around.
Always looking up then down.
Trying not to meet your eyes.
Nervous, hyper, overthinking.
To be myself? Or to be wise?
Wise then..
Stop slouching when your not alone.
Collect the courage to leave your home.
Add some numbers in your phone and maybe make some friends
Who's realities aren't questionable.
Stop.
Focus.
Reality.
Back to your pretty eyes.
You smile pressing straw to lips and the ground is my disguise.
You ask me what I'm thinking.
I peek.
You really want to know?
I stop and imagine all the bad ways ex
I played air guitar with Death today.
I joined a pretend band.
Amelia on the drums, Fat tony plays the bass and Death dances on the stand.
We played for an abandoned prom
and kids who's date's might be their moms.
Amelia rocked her favorite songs off a barely charged phone.
Death was jumping up and down shouting never going home.
Fat Tony Played on his knees,
so I too played on mine.
I think my solo stole the show, but he'd say the same in kind.
I remember the salt in tears,
balloons, and Fat Tony's fears.
All Amelia's glances.
That the stage was wet from punch and sweat..
And that Death cries when she dances.
I regret my lateness,
For the date you never knew.
The words we never shared,
I think we'd have a few.
But I was too consumed with the world that was me
And arrived to an empty table,
of a book and chai tea.
Shun the blue sky
It lies. It lies.
In shades to hide my cocaine high.
A taste to buy the sun.
Such fire wasted on my breath,
the loud that’s in my lungs.
Sheath the death at desperate glee,
see me thee who all I be.
Blame the purple moon.
I was drowning in the sky,
as I breathed the ocean blue.
Crushed beneath the somber high,
on a rooftops secluded view.
A cloud rose within my chest.
I sighed it into air.
It bloomed a darkened swirling mess,
Then left a twisted prayer.
As I sank up the currents peak,
I broke the surface of the sky.
Ripples spread across its creek,
a dark haze seeps my eyes.
The Suns heat pricks my skin,
now all the air is gone.
Remnants of a clouded grin,
I awaken in the dawn.
I wake up on the roof,
The air had made me pale
but I don't breathe in.
I exhale.
I opened a window,
the wind was strong and rough.
This letter must be infinity
I feel the sky has called my bluff.
Either I cannot profess my feelings,
or just that words are not enough.
so I took a little time.
Folded you In between confessions,
found the words to rhyme
And stated my regression.
See I'm still here..
With this weight
and my fears.
I wish I could say I escaped through that window
That I am not the same
Writing these letters hoping you'll find them
Through these paper planes.
If I could draw a picture,
i'd make the best of me.
Sketch a draft for scripture,
just for you to see.
I'd show you how I smile,
redraw and shade my eyes
and hide away the details,
While shading in the lines.
I'd focus on the meaning
and means with every mark.
Make myself the shadow,
of a pure reflected dark.
Contrast would be the title,
Oh how nice it'd be to see.
To compare the pure untainted paper,
to the shaded and sketchy me.
Then they see it clearly,
their faces bitter and tart.
They'd take my pencil dearly,
and erase me
all apart.
They say when Alice fell
she didn't care.
All deflections reflected in.
The looking glass
made bare and thin.
Throughout the whole affair,
she dared to blame a single hare.
and despite her fate
of sadness.
She was simply late,
to meet her madness..
The world was small that day.
When it went not dark,
but grey..
and we had no remarks.
Trapped from the rain
at the sheltered part.
from the edge of mundane
a small world was ours.
for seconds
or hours
afraid to blink
and miss it all,
we stood among our worlds rise.
and let the silence
dream it's fall..
So if you feel another world,
drop gently with the rain.
trapped in that quiet place,
with they
who feel the same.
Don't speak.
take it in
take it all
you're gonna miss,
when the world
was small.
Raindrops slow the noise.
Steady goes the quiet from the sound.
Noisy glances from girls and boys trying not to move around.
Always looking up then down.
Trying not to meet your eyes.
Nervous, hyper, overthinking.
To be myself? Or to be wise?
Wise then..
Stop slouching when your not alone.
Collect the courage to leave your home.
Add some numbers in your phone and maybe make some friends
Who's realities aren't questionable.
Stop.
Focus.
Reality.
Back to your pretty eyes.
You smile pressing straw to lips and the ground is my disguise.
You ask me what I'm thinking.
I peek.
You really want to know?
I stop and imagine all the bad ways ex
I played air guitar with Death today.
I joined a pretend band.
Amelia on the drums, Fat tony plays the bass and Death dances on the stand.
We played for an abandoned prom
and kids who's date's might be their moms.
Amelia rocked her favorite songs off a barely charged phone.
Death was jumping up and down shouting never going home.
Fat Tony Played on his knees,
so I too played on mine.
I think my solo stole the show, but he'd say the same in kind.
I remember the salt in tears,
balloons, and Fat Tony's fears.
All Amelia's glances.
That the stage was wet from punch and sweat..
And that Death cries when she dances.
I regret my lateness,
For the date you never knew.
The words we never shared,
I think we'd have a few.
But I was too consumed with the world that was me
And arrived to an empty table,
of a book and chai tea.
Shun the blue sky
It lies. It lies.
In shades to hide my cocaine high.
A taste to buy the sun.
Such fire wasted on my breath,
the loud that’s in my lungs.
Sheath the death at desperate glee,
see me thee who all I be.
Blame the purple moon.
I was drowning in the sky,
as I breathed the ocean blue.
Crushed beneath the somber high,
on a rooftops secluded view.
A cloud rose within my chest.
I sighed it into air.
It bloomed a darkened swirling mess,
Then left a twisted prayer.
As I sank up the currents peak,
I broke the surface of the sky.
Ripples spread across its creek,
a dark haze seeps my eyes.
The Suns heat pricks my skin,
now all the air is gone.
Remnants of a clouded grin,
I awaken in the dawn.
I wake up on the roof,
The air had made me pale
but I don't breathe in.
I exhale.
I opened a window,
the wind was strong and rough.
This letter must be infinity
I feel the sky has called my bluff.
Either I cannot profess my feelings,
or just that words are not enough.
so I took a little time.
Folded you In between confessions,
found the words to rhyme
And stated my regression.
See I'm still here..
With this weight
and my fears.
I wish I could say I escaped through that window
That I am not the same
Writing these letters hoping you'll find them
Through these paper planes.
If I could draw a picture,
i'd make the best of me.
Sketch a draft for scripture,
just for you to see.
I'd show you how I smile,
redraw and shade my eyes
and hide away the details,
While shading in the lines.
I'd focus on the meaning
and means with every mark.
Make myself the shadow,
of a pure reflected dark.
Contrast would be the title,
Oh how nice it'd be to see.
To compare the pure untainted paper,
to the shaded and sketchy me.
Then they see it clearly,
their faces bitter and tart.
They'd take my pencil dearly,
and erase me
all apart.
They say when Alice fell
she didn't care.
All deflections reflected in.
The looking glass
made bare and thin.
Throughout the whole affair,
she dared to blame a single hare.
and despite her fate
of sadness.
She was simply late,
to meet her madness..
The world was small that day.
When it went not dark,
but grey..
and we had no remarks.
Trapped from the rain
at the sheltered part.
from the edge of mundane
a small world was ours.
for seconds
or hours
afraid to blink
and miss it all,
we stood among our worlds rise.
and let the silence
dream it's fall..
So if you feel another world,
drop gently with the rain.
trapped in that quiet place,
with they
who feel the same.
Don't speak.
take it in
take it all
you're gonna miss,
when the world
was small.
I run alone in the night
Buried in my thoughts
In my secret garden to be found
Roses on walls, on ground, in my hair
Running in my thoughts with wings on my back
Love is bitter and dyes my roses red
My secret garden’s white roses…
I hide from truth, from lies, from anything that hurts
I sang for the moon to listen and for the sun to love me
I sang for the night to hug me but the day just hurt me
I hide deep in my roses, painted with care
Blue for love, blue for fake
Red for passion, red for blood
Wind brings hair in my face
My last white rose is dying in my hands
I am closing the gates in my secret place
Contaminated with lies an
I don't breathe, I inhale by blackdahlia911, literature
Literature
I don't breathe, I inhale
There are moments where my eyes blur the light together,
taking in nothing and everything as it comes,
an eclipse of a struggling mind,
a kaleidoscope of moving clock parts,
gears grinding as the heart turns,
my body orbits the sun as if it were another moon,
my sentences, no longer coherent,
I am the space where the ocean meets the sand,
I am a stretch of the neck and an arch of the back,
palpitations, palpitate,
when did I become aware of the way the heart beats?
Everything moving so fast, so fast,
though going slow is but a state of mind,
I could collapse your lungs like folding chairs,
leaving you as breathless as me,
for I don't ever
Imagine us in a world all alone
Imagine all life to be captured in stone
Your body, lazy, languid grace
A touch, a tilt, a treble trace
We live our lives tasting the sun
Contrary, look at all le jeune
Every kiss, we pass the time
It's the rhythm in our rhyme
Forget about beauty cause we're living the sunrise
Laughing at prospects of older goodbyes
Every lift of my gaze
Clears your mind from a daze
I intend to be ridiculous
You'll be my echo of Orpheus
Imagine us in a world all alone
Me and you together in stone.
Her words.
They grace pages from the tip of her tongue.
Just one more melody that goes unsung.
Yet pen strikes at paper creating worlds and dreams.
Not knowing her own talent she takes them to extremes.
Unable to control her abilities she rhymes the world from reason..
Everything stops.
Time holds its breath.
The stars fade out.
She pauses death.
And life stands still.
She writes it all,
While watching from a window sill.
In the worlds she made.
Away from the loud reverberations of stress, life, and boys.
She finds she is finally able
To Hold The Noise.
I asked the sky a question.
In which it gave me no reply.
It happened when an angel fell,
As I came walking by.
Her neck was collared tight.
her wrists were bound in chains.
Her skin scorched
and body ravaged
I could almost feel her pain.
White wings were burnt and broken,
they flapped useless at her sides.
Her eyes pure yet unfocused,
Pointed toward the sky.
And the part I’ll leave unspoken,
Is the anguish
as she cried.
I know a broken angel,
She’s close yet so astray.
But I’ve seen her hidden smiles,
And the pain she hides away.
I know it’s not my place to ask,
That the answers
have no sound.
And though
Where The Yellow Flowers Grow by Mierren, literature
Literature
Where The Yellow Flowers Grow
There is a place in the country, where the city does not know.
of how the yellow flowers glow.
where the grass is greener than the leaves, and dirt is browner than the trees.
where the wind hugs warmly and you hug back,
the trees give shade
so take a nap.
The children are nice, the people are kind,
and no one is ever left behind.
The sun is bright yellow, the sky is so blue.
The moon pure silver, the stars a bright hue.
The air is so fresh and nice to the taste,
you gasp for breath,
there's plenty to waste.
Down by the fields filled with corn and wheat.
Lived your new friend, who often came to your street.
they pulled at your hand, and s
I am an artist My emotional sate of mind is easily swayed, So You may me find me on one one side of the spectrum or the other. In and out of many different planes and levels. I firmly believe I am incapable of describing myself So I can only ask you to expect everything. And expect nothing.
It’s hard to keep up with it right?
i don’t write as much as I should
and I don’t like and comment as much as I should be
because there’s a lot of brilliance here and it’s underappreciated
i want to say life gets in the way but we all know we could make time
honestly I’m in the way of myself
ive seen a lot of people come and go on deviant art
Their work and presence fades away
let’s hope we don’t as well
more stuff coming, I’m just getting out of a painting project and I’ve got a few ideas towards maturing my writing.
And an actual novel to be ready by spring
let
Sometimes I feel it most when I'm not there.
In a green haze fazed, next to the girl with the purple hair.
I take a sip slipping quick deeper.
The black couch with the mad slouch, leaning with the sleepers.
She tips a kiss mixed with a fit and then falls apart.
these people dumb, frozen and numb. They ain't got no hearts.
I draw blanks, my memory banks and thoughts loom.
The red rose with girls posed like portraits up in the bedrooms.
Crashing basement amps and flashes of slower lights.
Conversations with shady vamps
that hide in like lower life's.
Dark places in small spaces splattered with blue paint.
The blacklight shows the past life of
tell me where the people go..
there are names crossed out under art
they chose to leave but made their mark
nobody speaks of the ghosts
an uncaring world maybe i the most
but today i wonder somewhat aloud
not for the sick, the dead, or those lost in a crowd
for in this moment i implore to know
tell me where the people go?
just wrote this
its raw unpunctuated
and not my best
i could explain to you in detail
what the poem above means to me
and what i wanted to express to you
but i hate that. honestly i wish my art would Warrant no questions
i am at the base of my soul unconventional
so when i draw or paint or write im h
Hey Mierren, I wanted to personally thank you for joining us here at Writers-Commentary We're very excited to have you! Feel free to begin submitting, we currently have a 5 a week limit, and start commenting on some of the works already submitted. I'm sure the poetry folder would hold some interest for you If you have any questions, thoughts, or ideas feel free to message me, another Admin, or the group.