Looking back this started out with just a brilliant theme. But now I really enjoy it this poem is quite childish my words are mediocre and gives off the feeling of being messy and unfinished. It is only until you read the very last words that you comprehend the full poem. Now like most of my poems I did draw a picture to go with this. Of a small child alone on a hill under a tree with the knees tucked to the chin the shade of the tree hiding any real recognizable features leaving the child sad, alone and giving it the appearance of almost fading away. But I couldn't do it the picture was too sad. So I leave you with the words. Please let me know what you think.