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I once had a friend.
That was made of pretend,
Who's only friend was me.
We played all alone,
Just all on our own.
Down on the hills,
And the trees.

We ran through the woods,
Jumped in the hills,
And played in the dark,
Because we lived for the thrills.
We went on our journeys,
And time would stand still.
The world would change,
Because it was our will.

Then came the days…
My friend started to fade.
We no longer spoke,
We just sat in the shade.
And as we sat silent
We looked at the sky .
My friend left for the last time,
Without a goodbye.
I guess the fact is.
They were no longer shy.

I once had a friend,
I thought was made of pretend.
Who supposedly no one could see.
So I sit and I wait,
Pretending their late.
Alone with no guarantee.
Hoping and saying ,
Undoubtedly praying.
The friend,
Of pretend.
Wasn't me.
:iconmierren:
Ok so what would you do if you thought you had an imaginary friend. but it turned out you were the imaginary one. this is a poem inspired by a weird dream. it could use some work but its a neat theme
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~XxXWiltingVioletXxX Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love the theme! It reminds me of a story I started writing a year or two ago... Great work :)
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STRAIGHT TO FAVS! So much emotion!!!! Awesome poem!
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Mood: Love ~Mierren Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you!
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:iconthewitchofgrich:
beautiful :D very beautiful :D :D
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~Mierren Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh thank you very much!
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*0hgravity Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
great rhythm to this and interesting concept!
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Mood: Joy ~Mierren Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks!
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*sleyf Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think the idea is brilliant, and I do love the rhythm of it. It makes for such a great little read and the end stanza makes the entire thing :D
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Mood: Joy ~Mierren Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks
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*sleyf Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome
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