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It’s always when it’s raining...
She calls me on the phone.
Her voice worried and hysterical,
Compelling me to get home.

She says
The sky is falling…
That everything’s coming down.
She can feel the whole world crying,
And she’s afraid she going to drown.

Hiding under an umbrella.
Isolated on her bed.
Maybe to keep the rain out,
Or the rumors that have spread.
Trying to ignore them,
Like the voices in her head.
She shuts her eyes to scream,
But silent raindrops fall
instead.

She believes
That one day,
The clouds might go away.
it leaves me stifled and choked,
When even on the sunny days,
it makes no sense,
that she's always soaked.

In the night.
She wakes to rain,
Hiding under an umbrella in fright.
Like the downfall causes her pain.
She tries to be brave,
Peeking up at the skies.
But she cant help herself,
So she just hides and cries.


   She cries.
   and she says
    God.
 I know i'm lost,
and I've almost lost it all.
    but please
    i'm praying
    Don't let this sky fall.
Sometimes I think if rain keeps falling,
maybe the sky would vanish eventually...
-starnoyume
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VanuInfiltrator Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's so hard for me to come up with poetry like this, yet people make it look so easy >.<
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Demonkitty66 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
beautiful :3
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Fasiafloho3-is-I Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
This is nicely worded. I especially like the 3rd to last stanza.
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Mierren Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you!
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starnoyume Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
Sometimes I think if rain keeps falling, maybe the sky would vanish eventually, I know it's stupid to think this way lol
The fear and desperation you described here really touched me...well done.
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Mierren Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you!
"Sometimes I think if rain keeps falling, maybe the sky would vanish eventually" your words are exactly right and i will quote you on them thanks!
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starnoyume Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
wow I think I'm honored^^
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SouthernWriter2 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This based on the Adele song?
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Van-Dunkelschreiber Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It sounds to me like she is depressed
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Mierren Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha! very insightful as always thanks!
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