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Take me to a place, she said;
my dreams no longer see.
My heart is breaking, my will is gone;
I'm not who I used to be.
Show me the place you can only see once;
a world for just you and me.
Take me there, to that place;
where the impossible tries to be.

Where the light and the dark share their love;
where the sun and the moon dance above.
A place where the grass and wind
become the sea;
and splash their waves all over me.
Clouds are colors that become the sky;
taste them as they pass on by.

A place where Angels go to cry;
and tears rain down from cold clear sky's.
I'll look up sadly through the rain;
and understand the worlds pain.

so please don't let me fall asleep;
and die for a world i cannot keep.
but don't dare wake me if i dream;
You'll rip our world at its seams.

she left for the place that transcends time;
she'll live forever and ever mine.
a place i will never get to see,
because this world won't let me be.
I can only imagine.
oh so bitterly,
about the place;
Where The Impossible Tries To Be.
this is the shortened version if you would like the full contact me.
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FieryDownpour479 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the idea of a place where the impossible tries to be.
It's so melodically written and beautiful, I can just imagine someone singing your poem to this song www.youtube.com/watch?v=-BctSY… They both just go so well with each other.
Your poem is just so beautiful, and I really love it.
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Mierren Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! This is my favorite poem and I love that you love it. Hug 
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FieryDownpour479 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :)
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SweetlyC Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
What a beautiful place its a shame the world wont let you be!!!
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rhgraphicsolutions Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
"A place where Angels go to cry;
and tears rain down from cold clear sky's.
I'll look up sadly through the rain;
and understand the worlds pain."

Love those lines and the whole thing
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Mierren Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much! this is personally my favorite poem and i'm glad you enjoy it too!   Hug 
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ThatPURPLERaven Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this poem just inspired me to write one. thank you for recalling nostalgia to me. and i'd really love to read the full version
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Shyanne-Kai Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012
This is so beautiful. I don't know why, but it's making me feel nostalgic for something.
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Mierren Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha thanks! reading this one always gives me the same feeling
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Aznsiegler Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I too would much appreciate the full version if I may. ^^ It is very beautiful.
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